In the interface, we need to resonate with users through dialogue. Accurate and clear words are easy to understand, and a suitable tone can build a sense of trust easily. Therefore, in the interface design, copywriting should be taken seriously. There are some points to note when using and writing copy:
- Consider from the user's point of view
- Express consistently
- Placeimportant information in prominent positions
- Professional, accurate and complete
- Concise, friendly and positive
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## Language
In the interface, copywriting is the basis of our communication with users. Therefore, the expression of words should be carefully deliberaed and designed. With clear, accurate, and concise copywriting, the user experience can be more user-friendly.
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When expressing content, the focus should be on users -- what they can do with your product? Not what you and your product are doing for them. The foothold of content representation is very important. Since it is user-centred design, copywriting should be user-centred as much as possible.
> Note: Use "we" to comunicate with users when they are reporting questions, suggestions or complaints to the systems, such as "We will consider your complaint.".
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Omit useless words and do not repeat facts known to users. In the most situations, there is no need for the interface to describe all the details. Try to provide short and accessible content.
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<imgclass="preview-img bad no-padding"alt="Wrong Example"src="https://gw.alipayobjects.com/zos/antfincdn/qnPRlCpzZz/388f7772-d962-49ee-a103-582e3ff6c0ca.png"description="Stand from the user's point of view and say what the user is familiar with.">
<imgclass="preview-img good no-padding"alt="CorrectExample"src="https://gw.alipayobjects.com/zos/antfincdn/OP88j1SDf6/ef562312-9a51-456b-8e53-a127c9f25e80.png"description="The word order is the same on the same page and in the same area.">
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<imgclass="preview-img no-padding"src="https://gw.alipayobjects.com/zos/antfincdn/3zhhAZYGSc/ba1c9133-abb3-4f67-b116-544e9ad0cbad.png"alt="The operation name and the target page title should bethe same.">
<imgclass="preview-img good no-padding"alt="CorrectExample"src="https://gw.alipayobjects.com/zos/antfincdn/ivTpE4BgSU/16dc61e6-f85c-43d1-9abd-86b046730a6a.png"description="Put important information first in a limited space (or make it more visibale with highlights, blank space, etc.).">
<imgclass="preview-img bad no-padding"alt="Wrong Example"src="https://gw.alipayobjects.com/zos/antfincdn/X%24DPUktJbT/a19e0548-1bdd-49f0-ab93-5358b5cf1a4c.png"description="The content that the user cares most is hidden in the paragraph, which is not easy to find out.">
<imgclass="preview-img good no-padding"alt="CorrectExample"src="https://gw.alipayobjects.com/zos/antfincdn/70QcFGdW%26H/6e0d94da-3ce9-471d-b57c-9f8f038d409f.png"description="Users can learn about the benefits of the settings.">
<imgclass="preview-img bad no-padding"alt="Wrong Example"src="https://gw.alipayobjects.com/zos/antfincdn/eKXgIakJPk/1cb7213d-61c4-41f2-84f0-256bcf436fe3.png"description="Users can't get the meaning of the settings.">
When we want the user to take an action, we should focus on what the user can get and how the he/she feels. Telling users the purpose or importance of the action can make them more willing to perform it.
<imgclass="preview-img good no-padding"alt="CorrectExample"src="https://gw.alipayobjects.com/zos/antfincdn/7oHuZX%26n5h/8fef2777-0841-4ea7-a274-75d6e78b6c15.png"description='Compared to "failure", "unable to complete" is a more objective result and easier for users to accept. Users need to know what to do next in the event of a problem.'>
<imgclass="preview-img bad no-padding"alt="Wrong Example"src="https://gw.alipayobjects.com/zos/antfincdn/oqI9DerB%26W/857e91be-ed75-4b70-aca9-811581080edd.png"description='Do not inform users "failure" coldly for abnormal situations.'>
Error reporting is a common feature in the UI, and it is an important part of user experience. When the user inputs the wrong content, your error message should be consistent with the user's cognition, and expressed in an easy-to-understand way.
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<imgclass="preview-img bad no-padding"alt="Wrong Example"src="https://gw.alipayobjects.com/zos/antfincdn/ZG%26eSSivMP/c6b8413b-6651-4b6c-bbbc-5464e00761fc.png"description="Incomplete, ambiguous, or too colloquial.">
Use general basic words normatively. Spell correctly, express completely. Professional terms should be accurate, according to industry standards; the expression of time must be clear.
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<imgclass="preview-img bad no-padding"alt="Wrong Example"src="https://gw.alipayobjects.com/zos/antfincdn/Np4rjq6bhw/8b13eab9-5441-43f5-8363-acc6d42b5cd0.png"description='The description of time is not a specific "day" or "month", which confuses users.'>
Language defines content, while emotions and atmosphere are expressed more in tone. The same content can be expressed in different tones to different users. Take an example, to professional operators and new users,we should use different copywrite.
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<imgclass="preview-img bad no-padding"alt="Wrong Example"src="https://gw.alipayobjects.com/zos/antfincdn/ssgx2B5f2W/f7327c68-708c-4707-b14f-d1951616c9f9.png"description="「can't」, 「don't」 make user feel a sense of command and pressure.">
Give users support and encouragement, not commands or pressure. If you want to keep your users, don't blame them when things go wrong. Focus on solving problems, not blaming.
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When using the full name of the product, capitalize the first lettter of each word. Write the abbreviations of product names in capital, such as ESC, SLB, etc.
> People are much more used to reading words in lowercase letters, those are what our brains find easiest to scan and instantly absorb. Please avoid capitalizing whole words or phrases.
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